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date/time Sunday, November 29, 2009,2:31 PM

I was here :)

*sorry, aku pun nda tahu kenapa picture ku luan basar :P*

I'm bored & tired. really tired I mean.
&& I miss you guys so much. Bachelorettes, where have all of you been?

I wish you guys were here. I want to meet & read all of your super fanfic ♥

HAHA. Okay, I'm blank.

Iffah;Iffah, can't you stay in Brunei? jantah belayar waah. Mun jumpa JH
bwa aku :P HAHA Onew ada rah rumah ku :P
Fatin;Umma, I haven't heard any news from you this lately, busy dating kah
umma? or mendamba pilu because uppa?
Qilah; monkey! Don't be sad because of Taemin, He's mine :P Nda bahh. He is
yours. You know what? I dreamt about Taemin bah. I wish JH plang :P
Irah; anie pun sama orang inlove ani! Who's it rah? Kaling or tambi? HAHA I
know that person is Minho, P minho rah ku, cna nie? HAHA. nda bah!
Nad; Nad, aku liat gambar yang si Fadh ambil ahhh, Ko tinggi ahh.
*jealous. bagi aku nadd. Aku mahu tinggi. BTW, si Taylor HOT! Bagi cha aku.
Naz ; Adang ko merajuk pasal kerumahku anie. Balum lagi bah. Baru planning.
About kerumahmu & bouncer thingy alum ahh, My mum diam2 ganya. My dad ckap
tanya my mum. Yatah nie. BTW, aku ambil si jasper :P HAHA

I MISS YOU ALL ♥

♥MG

date/time Friday, November 27, 2009,11:20 AM

IT'S ME, your very cute friend, IRAH! :D

since qilah and nad had uploaded their picture...i decided to upload mine too. HAHA. yeah, lame introduction...~ so anyways...

Aki's fict comment (mostly chapter ten):
the sweetest moment by far, you were sleeping on his shoulder and he was sleeping with your head as his pillow. was there, by any chance, a BIG GOOFY GRIN (geez, i love that three words!) upon your face as you typed them all?! hahaha, i woudnt surprise if you say yes as i, myself, couldnt stop shrieking while reading it ;P

and you sleep like a squirrel! (why squirrel qil??) HAHAHAHAHAHA. and shuuko, saori, kanae and izumi went wild in the lunchroom. cali cali cali! i was picturing this moment in my head and it was PERFECT!

happy with the comment, qil? see how simple it is with no confusing and repitition words? :) i still dont get this part.

Your fic is awesome and i know you know that it is, 'cause theoretically it is, even you know that it obivously is the way it theoretically is just like how i said it literally is the way it theoretically is like who am i kidding? (consider yourself a noob if you dont understand this, Kidding!)

i am a noob (whatever it is, i can't find it in the dictionary. and DO NOT LAUGH if you do!) then since i dont understand a thing except the 'Your fic is awesome and i know you know that it is' part. HAHAHA. you owe me an explanation!

Iffah's fict comment:
NICE GOING but still i hate Kelly! can you skip to the happy ending already? hahaha....inda wa...never mind, i want to read how Minho decided to leave her. *grin. and Jang Geun Suk is even there! KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH! lucky midah!

And when you mentioned how bad Onew's soup tasted, i pictured that his soup was all greenish colour (just like how it would be if this is spongebob squarepants hehehe). eurgh! he didnt even know how ginger looks like! well, even I dont know what ginger is. Halia ka tu? hahaha. So maybe i dont know how ginger look like, but at least i KNOW how CHILLI look like! XP

Iffah, comment on my fict jua! hope you like my comment~ and by the way, i like it when Minho took Sakura to the roof. I imagined that the roof was an awesome place...wish i could go there hehe. *smile dreamily

ATTENTION BACHELORETTES! MIDAH, NAZ, FATIN, AKI, NAD AND IFFAH. I WANT TO KNOW WHAT YOUR IDEAL DRESS IS, COMPLETE DARI DRESS TO SHOES. i need it for my fict. the grand ball is coming~ if you got the picture, lagi bagus XP oh, this goes to nad and naz jua as you two's character will be there as well X)

i found mine already...and it is perfect to allow minho to give me a piggy back ride! KYAAH!

i miss you all bachelorettes!! :) nad, i was thinking to buy brownies from you since i promised nina that i will lanja her if she made it to form 4 next year. why did i even agree to this? pfft! anyways...alum confirm, nanti aku gtau kau. hehe.

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date/time Wednesday, November 25, 2009,3:31 PM

Nadeerah Suhardi was here

HOLLA!

WAHHH! what happened to this blog??

it is full with WORDS!

try to put some pictures. okayy??

HAHHAHAHA

oh and, Fadh tagged a photo of us time atu after aerobics (i think)

so yeah.

Naz ; jadi tah bouncer ahh??

Iffah ; aku jumpa WM lagi. hahahaha.

Qil ; nahh! i remember the email and the password!! hahhahaha.

Irah ; esuk aku school ihh.

Teen ; bawa uno. hahhahahaha

Middie ; bapamu inda sayang kau. HAHAHHAHA. NADAWAHH

I MISS YOU GUYS!!

-xo, N!

date/time Tuesday, November 24, 2009,7:34 PM

Chapter 10's comments ♥

I was practically out of the world already, Trying to think a solution but failed to come out with one. Oh shoot oh shoot oh shoot oh shoot this is horrible this is horrible this is horrible.
Horrible? It seems to be the opposite for me! AHA. That watchman is rock. ILHIM 

“ Are you okay? You looked like a morbid wide eyed rotten beggar just now,” He put on a worried expression which gradually changes into a sarcastic devilish expression.
Beggar? That’s rude! Why don’t you show him your puppy face look? Oww, he’s worried about you! High-5! & why does his expression change? What have you done?

“very funny Taemin. We’re locked, and what’s more worse is that.. we’re alone!,” I stood up and looked around the vast wooden floored room in search of something useful that could be use to break out of the room.
*GASP! ALONE??! HAHA. Why do you want to break it? There won’t be any romantic-moment-that-i-like-so-much part!

“ Im always funny didn’t you know?” He rose. “ And cute too,” He added while leaning against the wall where I was leaning on as well and then folded his arms.
Now it’s start again~ HAHA. Key umma, this comes from you! You shouldn’t make him become this way!

“shut up Taemin, there are a lot of guys who is much more cuter than you,” I placed my palm on my forehead to ease the pain I was feeling inside of my head.
Are you sure Qil? Is that words come really deep from you heart? HAHA. Is there’s any, Tell me who?
For me, JH is more cuter! JK 

“ what?” I cried out in surprise. “ why did you bring him up again?” I turned to him to face him while he had his eyes looking at the ceiling.
I’m suppost, He’s jealous? He really want to know what you think about KH(give up will ya?!). Sweet! He was looking at the ceiling? Just like I always do? HAHA *beingcrazy!

“ Well, truth to be told.. He’s good looking but- “ Before I could continue. He treaded heavily to the black couch against the wooden floor as if he was intending to crush them. He sat on the couch with his arms folded and looked away from where I was standing.
Now he’s mad. & That is all your fault. You shouldn’t tell him that! You should say this, “yeah, but you’re more good-looking than him & I love you more!’ Btw,have you know your real feeling to both of them?

“ Do not even back away from me,” He said in a stern voice and then turned himself like an officer to me “ It’s easy really, yes or no?”
Owwww~ Sweet! Yeah don’t you even dare. Ditch KH & let him be with me! HAHA

I stood up to make sure that he wont see my blushing face. “ You should at least think of something useful that could get us out of here instead of thinking about those kind of things,”
Why did you blush? Is it because of KH or Taemin? HAHA. He just want to get the chance asking this kind of love matter with you. Tell him that you love him. FASTER OR I WILL TAKE HIM AWAY FROM YOU!

In a matter of split seconds he wrapped his left arm around my shoulders and whispered chillingly. “ I was just teasing you,”
Am I wrong? Did he teased you or he just want to know the truth? Love the part when he wrapped him hand around you shoulder *SHRIEKING! OMG

As he whispered those word to my ears I practically shoved him away and fell back to the couch in surprise while covering my mouth in embarrassment. I don’t like people touching my neck or well, do anything to my neck and seeing as by whispering, I could practically feel his well, nearness to me.. or my neck, It’ll make me run away like a mad hogwash.
Cool! HAHA. He is so romantic. Really romantic I mean! *yourimaginationisabit…youknow!

“ Are you crazy ?” He said while pulling himself up after being pushed lying on the cold floor by the staggered me who was still on the couch taken aback from what he did.
You pushed him? HAHA. I bet you’re blushing! HAHA

He then gave out a rather loud laugh and sat next to me while leaning on it, facing me. “ By any chance, are you scared?”
HAHA. He shouldn’t ask that question. It’s sound Stupid! HAHA. AAAA~ He was sitting next to you! Facing you? Eye-contact!! HAHA

I gave him a ridiculous look on my face and ignored his question when he suddenly got nearer to me while having one of his hand on my shoulder. He then slowly lowered his face to the frozen me.
His face is near now. OMG! I know we already had talk about this. But seriously, I still can’t get this out of my head. GAGA!

He then tried to hold his laughter in while practically failed foolishly. “ I umm… *laughs* your expressions are just astoundingly awesome to look at,”
HAHA. Isn’t that mean that he always look at you? Owwwh. Cool!

“ oh, well, we used to be neighbors and he was so close to my brother that I suddenly took a liking-“ on him – was what I was supposed to continue but then I decided to stop.
No!!you shouldn’t tell him anything! he’ll mad at you like before & then, Kanata Hongo’ll appear the most on the next chapter which unfortunately, I don’t like it! Aku mahu kau ma Taemin bah! HAHA

“ On him?” he continued my sentence and then gave of small chuckle. “ why don’t you just confess to him?” I can see that he wasn’t really smiling as genuine as he was before this.
Now he knew *madatyou! Super Mad! See? He was jealous. Me, as your love asst. should kill you until you confess your feeling towards Taemin! *angry!

It’s just that I feel really comfortable around Taemin despite all his annoyances.
What? Do you like Taemin already? Eyaaa, What a beautiful feeling!

“ Well, I feel differently about him now anyway, I don’t like him as in how I was totally infatuated over him like I used to, I like him as in the way he took a great care of me like he was actually a very close friend,”
Is it because you fell in love with Taemin? Is there any butterfly in your stomach feeling like Irah always had? HAHA. Irah is falling in love with someone! Kan? Kan?
I could see from the corner of my eye that Taemin as looking at me probably observing my weird antics. And then gave off a soft chuckle and stretched his right arm to my head and started to mess my hair up .
Cuteee! Macam cerita apa nie ah? Lupa ku! HAHA. Tapi ada nie! Yatah cutee! Eyaaaa, banyak meliat cerita Indon ko Qil? HAHA. Ceritaaa romantic saja nie diliatnya!

He then handed me the sweater leaving him only his white shirt that I think could kill him in this kind of temperature. “ put it on, It’s getting colder now,”
Owwwh, double sweetness! He was making a sacrifice just for you! You should appreciate by ….. Yah! I know, stop seeing that KH guy! Okay Qil?

“ I don’t want to to sit next to a corpse so just do as I said, okay?”
Okay, that’s rude! Corpse? Jadi hantu Qil, kali kacau Taemin. HAHA

“ Taemin, you’re not cute, now give me that back,” I demanded.
Cute kaliah Taemin!!!! Nda apa ko Qil, Taemin sama aku ja nie! HAHA. JK!

“ oh wow! This young lady knows just what I want,” he then leaned his side on the couch and looked outside. “ come to all my lessons until Ms.Ga in comes back,”
Eyaaaa, you guys will frequently meet each other then. Brilliant!!

“Hey! You know I was thinking maybe, I could, you know, bring you out this Saturday somewhere, to um… repent ?” I asked and started to rub my hands together to shake off the coldness I was feeling.
You guys will having a date. However, I know that KH guy will ruin it. I already read this. I know! & you!!! How could you sleep when he is asking for a date? GRRR~

“ just look at how you’re sleeping..” I muttered while smiling. “ just like a squirrel.. with its eyes closed of course”
Eyaaaa, Romantic eyhh! Qil, squirrel tidur buka mata wah? Aku nda tahu. HAHA!

I had her head leaning to the couch at that time when suddenly it fell without warning on my left shoulder. She looked peacefully calm while sleeping that it made me smile at the sleeping her. I then instead of moving her head back to where it was leaning before, let it leaned on my shoulder, thinking that I shouldn’t do anything more or else I might wake her up. She must’ve been really sleepy, “ .. because you fell asleep that fast” I muttered as I made my shoulder to become her sleeping pillow.
OMG! I really like this part to the max! HAHA. It was really sweet. He was watching you when you was sleeping! Oww~

I slowly opened my eyes. “ WAIT THIS ISNT MY ROOM!!” I yelled as I pounced off the couch hitting that hard thing lying on top of my head before.
Are you in Taemin’s room? Or guest’s room? COME ON!! TELL ME!! LYING ON TOR OF YOUR HEAD? WHAT IS IT???! TAEMIN’S HEAD?

She politely bowed, which I returned to her as well, and gave me a Polaroid photo of this two, who seemed to be a couple with heads depending on each other for support – the girl had her head on the guy’s shoulder while the guy had his head on top of that girl’s head. How sw- “ WHAT?!!!!”
HAHA, the sweet evidence! Cool! How can she had that picture? Who took it? KH? Impossible!

“ Im gonna make the caption as ..’when Aki borrowed my shoulder ’” He then broke into a scary smirk.
LMAO! But cute! Caliii waaaaaah!!

“ you!” I exclaimed as he disappeared into the toilet. “ yes I know! YOU ARE ONE STUBBORN CONCEITED AIRHEAD FROM MARS!”
Mars? Bagus, He is an alien then. & you’re falling in love with a very handsome alien from mars.

LOL at your mum reaction! Seriously, she was worried but then when taemin told hwe that he was with you.. It look like she LIKE it. HAHA. Weyaaa, it’s look like you guys will marry soon.

“ you!” I exclaimed as he disappeared into the toilet. “ yes I know! YOU ARE ONE STUBBORN CONCEITED AIRHEAD FROM MARS!”
Owww, cute!really cute!

“ OH MY GOD,” the four monkeys girls exclaimed in a tone which makes you wonder whether theyre exclaiming in horror/disgust/happiness/envy/ or whatever. Pretty explanatory, you exclaim this when you’re surprised, and they did this after I told them that I was locked in that room for a night with Taemin.
See? The monkeys again! Why are you calling us monkeys, you squirrel!(according to Taemin nick to you) HAHA. We were really happy for you.

“ did you two really, like, sleep together?” Shuuko gaped at me.
HAHA, that’s a really good question. Keep up the good work, Irah!

Then Kanae had her index finger moved slowly to the right and left infront of me. “ nu-uh woman, buses are filled with peoples while there were obviously no one in that dancing room except you two,”
“ and it’s soundproof,” Kanae folded her arms after mentioning that fact to me earning a stare from us.

I love you more Iffah! HAHA. Qil, you can’t deny it now!! I sure love us! HAHA

They then went berserk and turned into real monkeys jumping up and down in enthusiasm while practically turning around gaining some attention. Even SHINee looked amused at them. Why not? They’re practically jumping up and down like a bunch of kids that were given ice creams.
REAL MONKEYS? YAAAH!!! We were really happy until we can’t think of the fact that we were in the canteen where there were like hundred of people including our lovely SHINEE! GRR

Shuuko then approached me and put her hand on my shoulder. “ im proud of you,” then practically went back into that bunch of native Indians (im not racist)
Me too! WHAT INDIANS? Karang ko qil! AHA

Then they looked at each other then motioned in small circles and sang, “ LOVE TRIANGLE SOOO BIIZARREE!! LOVE TRI-“
HAHA. WHEEEEEEEEE~ isn’t we look so so happy & not to mention, crazy? Cool kan kami ah? HAHA.
KH LAGIII~ HUH!!

“ oh noes! Aki’s pissed at our evidence ! let’s run for the door,” Saori said rather dramatically earning a chuckle from Jonghyun that was near the dustbin at that time.
Me? JH? He laughed at me? AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA~ HAHA.
I look really crazy? Evidence? HAHA!

“ sorry,” he clears his throat and then turned to me. “ would you go out with me this Saturday?”
No!! Taemin already asked you. YOU KH! GO! HAHA
You’re not dreaming. It’s really Taemin. I love you & Taemin. So, who would you having a date with this Saturday?

He then stood up and then said. “ a long pause means a yes. Don’t forget it’s this Saturday!”
See? I hate him. IA MAHU DATE SAMA TAEMIN BAH KAU ANIE EYHHH!!

“ a date on Saturday, DONE!” Saori rose up from behind me while pressing some buttons on my Blackberry.
HAHA. Did i like KH here? I so don’t. In real life, awu plang. HAHA. Sibuk aku ahhh!

“ well, of course, trying to get more evidence on this..” she paused then held he face high . “ LOVE TRIANGLE~~~~~”
EYAAAA, aku ahh, COOL EYH! Woooooooooo~ HAHA. Lawa suara ku nyanyi? HAHA

“ well, setting the alarm of course, it’s a BIG day,” She said while biting of this one large hamburger.
HAHA. YES, A BIG DAY. YOU&TAEMIN’s plang tu!

“ ohh well, you see, I heard that guys don’t like skinny girls so yes, im not gonna starve myself anymore,” She said while eating heartily.
HAHA. I’m still on diet kaliah! I am not skinny so I’m still on diet. Jh suruh.. HAHA. *mihir!

“ SAORI WHERE ARE YOU GOING?” just as ive guessed, she’s trying to make us feel like we’re couples that just need a privacy.
Yes, you guys are couple. The most romantic couple. HAHA!

OMG! Taemin puya picture Cuteee ah. Like really cutee. Aku mahu! HAHAH. See? Reah picture atu ada please! Please! Please! So, DITCH KH BAH!

I WANT MORE! Don’t STOP! CONTINUE WRITING IT ASAP! Bek ko buat if inda, nda ku sekulah nie hari Khamis. HAHA.

MG♥

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date/time Monday, November 16, 2009,5:34 PM

Again Qil, waste your time on reading this :)

Chapter 8

Now I remember that I skipped my afternoon class with him because I was with Kanata hongo. Shoot I felt really bad for him now, If only I wasn’t too head over heels over Kanata’s manliness. He should have called me anyway.
Now you remember! he waited for you that long. You should kill Kanata Hongo! HAHA. JK. or you can give him to me? HAHA. JK!!! he wait that long because he want to know whether you are thinking about him when you're with Kanata Hongo, The hot guy you're falling in love with! Taemin must be hurt!

“ How did you know? Well I was wi-“ I stuttered while trying to keep my heart rate constant.
He stalked you? He's a stalker now. HAHA *whatamIhappyabout? Okaaay,He's jealous. Say you love him! come on qil!!

From his facial expression he doesn’t seem to be mad, but he was plain cold. Threwing me onto the couch was practically something that I never imagined him to do. He then moved his arms and moved away from me.
Nah, kan menyamal kan ya? Cuba ckap ILY. Come on, Don't be shy. HAHAHA!

“ but you ended up playing around with him, so what do you think I would feel like after waiting for a nearly hopeless five hours?” He looked at me and gave me a cold stare.
Seee? Told yaa! He's jealous! Don't you hear what I said? QILAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH~ *beingamonsteragain

“ It wasn’t her fault really,” Kanata hongo appeared from the stairs and then approached me and said to me “ I’ll fix this, Just go,”
I wonder what'll he say. So,Qil, Tell me, what did he said? comeone, at least, tell me as a preiew. can't you? *iammad!

At that time Taemin’s cold glare was intently fired to Kanata that I felt reluctant to leave them, What if they start a fight?
he's mature. Get it? In sassy girl chun-hyang? Fight with a glare? OMG!!! Qilah!! They're fighting because of you! Gimme more!!

You know, They are too much 2pm! HAHA. Walaupun...

“ what?” Izumi said while struggling trying to finish off her sandwiches on the other hand and holding the violin case on the other hand.
“ nothing. Im just commenting on how ridiculous you look like right now,” I snorted.
HAHA. Imagining this make me LOL! HAHA. yeah fah, You're ridicuous. try adding some cat stories. HAHA. Nda bah fah!

“ what? He was mad at me earlier for not coming and now he’s the one that’s not coming,” I sighed and pressed my head against the Piano keys. “ And I have to deal with my parents later on,”
yes, He's mad. Really mad. Not until you tell her that you love her. HAHA. What's up with your parents? Is he your arranged marriage partner? *winkwinkwink

Just outside the school building, there were some filming done by the Acting and broadcasting club, where I spotted Kagome.
KAGOME? Hey!!! My name's Saori. Are you forgetting me now? Ommaaa~! *crying! How dare you. That's me right? Or other people? because if it's other people i'll die in embarassing!

“ Am I not always looking rather lethargic?” I forced out a laugh. To be honest, I was thinking about him, whether or not I should apologize properly.
No, Not when TAEMIN's around & also, KANATA HONGO! yes, you should. & promise him that you won't forget his class & spend much of your time with him to make it even better :)

“ Did Taemin kissed you?” She widened her eyes at me which I ended up hitting her head because of that stupid question.
AHAHA, Yeaaaah, That should happen already. JK :) HAHA. Why do you hit me? & that Question's not stupid, That's a real & most logic question ever :)

“ Kanata! Hey,” I turned to him. It was Kanata hongo, As usual he had a smile on his face.
Kanata again? Why do I hate him so much? & what's with you? your story seems to be more focusing on KH nowadays. I'm disappointed. I miss your romantic scene with Taemin.

“ Oh there’s your car, come on,” He put his hand on my back while leading me. “ Don’t worry about Taemin, He was just having a bad day,”
Touched you again? hit him like you hit me! come on! HAHA. DON'T WORRY ABOUT TAEMIN? I'll KILL YOUUUU! come here!!! come on!! let's have a fight! *apakan??!

“ I happened to be pretty good at reading people’s mind,” He gave me as smile which he always gives whenever im feeling down.
Perasan jua drivernya sorang anie, Edyh! HAHA

“ Now that explains all ,” He exclaimed. “ In this case, youre the guilty person,”
Yeah mr. driver! You rock! I am your side. let's be friend here. Let's make them a couple, okay?

“ Well, because you practically left him but went with Kanata,” He said looking at me. “ That wasn’t fair, was it?”
High-5 Mr.Koji. I ♥ you! YAYAYYAYAYAAYYAYA!!! yes, you're not being fair enough qil!

“ you see, guys are very simple minded but very passionate about what they like, being treated differently, seeing as he is still a young boy, he would act like that,” Koji explained.
I really really love him. Yohoooo! HAHHA. yes, get it? I wish he could teach something about love to you :)

His answer made me open my eyes. That actually make sense,I mean in movies, Guys would go ballistic once he saw his girl with other men without even trying to find out what were their relation first. But that cant be the same for me and Taemin, Im just someone who was put under his responsibility.
Why not? He likes you *eventhough you don't know that. & He loves you *majal! & what a really negative brain you had :P

“you guys should stop saying that!!! “ I made a blowfish face while constantly trying to shake off the image of Taemin’s face off my mind. “ He doesn’t, I mean who am I to be liked by a guy like him?”
Agaain? I'll sure have a surgery on your brain someday! Think positive waaah! *shakeyou100x

“ You are a very cute and quirky girl, And you, young lady, is one in a million. So I cant see why not” He praised me which made me turned into a tomato – Seriously im bad in dealing with compliments so don’t even bother to give me one.
*winkwink :) What is this huh? HEHE, yes, I agreed on him more. HAHAH

“ And that is what makes you very lovable in everyone’s eyes,” He added.
Yes, I agreed. *shoutedwithahighnote

She gave a long pause and then finally said “ Because you parents are here”
Your parents are back? Then, your arranged marriage should be start now. When'll you guys meet? *eagerme!

OMG! Your dress and shoes are marvellous. But, That dress's sexy but nevermind,you'll be with Taemin *Isureitwastaemin :)

If im gonna have to run away, then I supposed it would be easier to use that since it’s somewhat like a sports shoe.
You won't my dear, it's taemin, the lovely boy ever! & not to mention, You guys are lover.

“ Dear, don’t you know how many guys would kneel down looking at you?” She sat down at a nearby sofa.
thousand aunt?

“ Zero, And no there wont even be any even if I wear a bikini ,” I frowned and sat next to her.
Of course ZERO because you don't even dare to go out and show it to them!!! apalaaa, HAHAHA!

She let out an exuberant laugh “ Why you’re still sixteen my dear, We wont do that,”
this answer made me sad & disappointed. Why??????????~~~~

“ Owww, She is so cute today!” the woman, who is the wife, shrieked with her hands holding each other. Then suddenly, a bell rang in my head. She looks very familiar. After a thinking quite hard, Her face suddenly emerges in my mind, THE HEAD MISTRESS OF MY SCHOOL!
she always cute Mrs.blank :) wait i am curious. Lee? LEE TAEMIN???!!!

He then gracefully took a seat in front of me and smiled at my parents and then turned to me and flashed a rather heart-stealing smile at me. I was so shocked that I could hardly utter a word. I even bet that I was gaping like I was awaiting for a golf ball to be fired into my mouth.
Wowo! I really love the astonish guy. Taemin popped out in my mind. is it him? HAHA. I'll read it next chapter!

You're pretty! Stop saying that you're ugly. I'll change your mind with a positive one tomorrow :)

Chapter 9 *AHAHHA

Does that ring a bell in your mind, Why it was none other than that Ronald Macdonald look alike, Taemin.
I know it's him. Your lovely-will-be-soon husband :) HAHAH. Stop being a tomato :)

“ Hey, are you waiting for a fly to fly into your dangling mouth?” He snorted quietly while checking out the menu book. And then looked up to me again and observed me, “ Am I that handsome? You cant even stop staring at me for a split second ,”
So,He's not mad at all huh? what a weird guy! HAHA. He's being a jerk again. HAHHA. Yes, you are! kan Qil?
I am really happy for this couple, Now even that KH can't split both of you apart :)

“ Wow, this is good. You guys look really close,” Mr lee gave a small clap while looking admiringly at the both of us.
yes & now you can start thinking a plan for their marriage Mr :) HAHA.

“ Actually, I’ve been helping her at school, She seemed to be really troubled on her first day,” He gave a pleased smile. Yeah right, accusing me as a stalker on my first day at school – Is that what you call helping?
You guys are back to normal. Thanks God. Love you! HAHAH. I want more!

“ pfft,” I scorned quietly. “ Affable my ass,” I muttered softly not wanting anyone to hear my should-not-be-heard-inappropriate-cuss.
You shouldn't said that. & you're being a ice princess again?

I was too absorbed into their conversation, that, I didn’t realize Taemin had his eyes on me. I coughed out purposely to shoo off my embarrassment, I don’t really like to be stared at.
WOW! Isn't that suppost to mean that he likes you & want you to react when both of your parents are start to make you close? HAHAHA, what a sweet taemin. Tomato :) HAHA. Cutee~~~
He want you to be jealous!!!

I got out of the women washroom when all of a sudden someone grabbed my gray-gloved left hand which made me gasped in consternation.
Sweeet~~~~~~~~~~~~~ AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA~*shrieking more! He touched you again! *going crazy!

“ Taemin!” I almost fell down from a nervous shock showdown when I saw him behind me grasping my arm.
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA~ *justdealwiththis :)
I envy you!

“ Where?” I asked in puzzlement, by the fact that he was holding my hand and also by the fact that he’s trying to kidnap me.
SWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET! If your mum & his mum know bout this you guys'll become a husband and wife on the next day :)

Taemin then stopped and took of his brown coat while suddenly approaching me in front of the staring people. I swear my eyes were about to pop out of shock at that time.
Ouuuhhh, this made me gone crazy. Please make it more!! HAHA

“ Wha-what are you doing,” I gently pushed him away as he wrap the coat on me.
OMG! sweet! I love Taemin. I love him!HAHA. you should be happy as hell right?

“ eventhough you looked well, lovely, in that dress but It’s not good to wear something like that in front of all these people ,” He caringly fix the coat on me. And then put his hands on my shoulders “ It’s cold right now anyway,”
*faint :) Sweet him :) I love him more. He doesn't want you to look sexy on people's eye.Sweet eyh! I love him! HAHA. what a romantic guy here :)

“wasn’t it your fault for dragging me out of the hotel leaving my cape behind?” I avoided making eye contact with him or else I might as well dig my own grave after exploding into a tomato. “ But what about you, aren’t you cold?”
HAHAH, cuteee :) qilah malu, apa nie! HEHE, avoiding an eye-contact? why you're afraid to drown in that cute little eyes? HAHA. Love is in the air honey :)

“ Me? Im a guy, so I can bear with it for long,” He stretched his arms upwards and then turned to me and gave a cunning grin at me , “ I would get into a lot of trouble if you’re gonna have to come home sick later on anyway,”
He care about you & that make me love him more. give me more! HAHA. He's really different now. I wish KH see this & finally forget about you!

“ What ?” I widened my eyes at him. “ Are you driving me to my own grave?”
“ If you want me to..” He laughed.” Just kidding, I wanted to apologize for my rather insolent behavior yesterday so yeah, go in,”
LMAO :) HAHAH. Adorable! You guys'll end up like romeo & juliet. Died together. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA *goinginsanebymownimagination

He put on his seat belt and put his fingers on his chin acting like he was thinking of something deeply. I was constantly drawn by his soft but sharp face structure; I seemed to always observe his face whenever we’re together.
I knew it :) HAHA. you're deeply in love with him. HAHA you! it's really romantic.

“ I always saw you at the school compound,” He lifted off his chin and looked at me. “ and also you were always with your DSLR camera around that school compound,”
Actually he always stalked you. Following you like a puppy *don't tell him. HAHA

“ It’s a pity that you didn’t know that ,” He said while turning the steering. “ Im good at everything,”
HAHA. Key must give him this attitude. AHHA

The dim orange lights adds a more dramatic feeling to the trees that lined the familiar streets. The moon that was crescent when I last looked at, was now a completely magnificent full moon.
What a romantic environment :) AAAAAAAAAAAAAA~

“ Nahhh, Just wanna show something that’ll at least brightens you up,” He smiled then walked off.
Owow, A secret place of him? OMG! where's it?

“ Wow, it looks pretty medieval at night,” I said when he suddenly turned and exaggerated the way he put his index finger on his lips then hissed ‘shhhhh’.
My eyes are playing trick on me. I saw the text 'on her lips' then, it's HIS. Her=me :) HAHA. i know, I need to go to hospital :)
AHAH

“ fine fine,” I gave up while still literally gaping over the medieval looking gothic structured school. Even the baroque styled ceiling looked even more magnificently accented at night. Amazed I was, I wasn’t even looking where I was going when I suddely bumped into Taemin.
Bumped? Taemin? in this romantic-as-hell environment? kill me now! Kill me! HAHHA

“ according to the ~~monkeys~~ girls, you’re the best dancer in SHINee?” I asked while I made my way to him.
Monkeys? AAAA~ jahat ko Qil ah. guys, Qilah called us Monkeys. menyamal kamu, tah! tah! *ndakumengcomments lagi nie.

“ come here,” He took both of my hands with his, while locking his eyes at me, and then started to walk in a backwards motion. “ sit here,” He let go of my hand to let me sit at the comfortable looking black couch.
*jealousyinme! HAHHA. I love you Taemin. make sure JH treat me like this. Okay?

locked in a room with a handsome guy? what a perfect story & freaking fun.

“ We’re doomed,” I muttered then sat properly as I began to feel uneasy about this whole thing. Let’s just hope Taemin is not that kind of guy…
What are you thinking little girl? HAHAHHA. Qilah & her brain. Yuhuuuuuu! HAHHAHA. Apa nie, what happen to your minor brain? HAHA

I want more & I'll hit you even harder if you don;t continue your story. Get it? I am your fan so treat me sweetly :) HHAHAHA. WTH? HAHA. Qil, give me more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I want to know what'll happen to you&him in that room? HAHAH romantic scene?

I LOVE TAEMIN's pictures~~~ the second picture looks cute. HAHA. & third one's hot! *iiamburning! HAHAHA

JongHyun Icon Pictures, Images and Photos

♥MG

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date/time 5:29 PM

Qilah, As I promise you...

Okay, I know it's midnight & I can't sleep, so I think I should just comment on her stories, so does Irah & Iffah (at the other post). :)
chapter 6
Oww, So it's Taemin point of view huh? HAHA. I love it! now, I'm sure know what he's thinking about Aki :) HAHA.
“ Wasn’t I always like this?” I pointed my own face while tucking my Ipod that was playing our recent song ‘SHINee Girl’ into my pocket.
Aaaa~ Shinee Girl. That's me! us! HAHA. okay, next one!
“ Well, you WERE, but then there was some kind of Tsunami revolting around you over the past few days and then all of a sudden, You became like what you used to be again, a smiling vending machine,” Key nagged while trying to get his dollar note accepted into the vending machine.
Hillarious! & I realize that when key is talking his script always kind of funny Qil. Good! *darpada ia perasan, HAHA. Correction key, It's not Tsunami or anything it's love. Taemin Love Aki. OMG! SMILING VENDING MACHINE? LOL!!! Wish to have that one in my house!
“ You looked like a morbid zombie that’s why the machine refuses your money ,” Minho snorted while taking off his green blazer. He wasn’t wearing the maroon vest underneath – oh well, the usual cool Minho.
LOL! morbid zombie? HAHA! Yes, he always cool! The usual minho look like that. You must be proud about this fact Irah.
“ Ah!” this familiar word has always been Onew’s whenever a light bulb of idea happened to light up in his mind. “ Could it be because of that girl?”
Yeees~ Qilah will turn to tomato if she know this. Right Qil? (Well, of course you know, you made this fanfic but HUH! you know what I mean..) Iffah! Onew fah! Onew!!
“ TAEMINNNN HAS A GIRLFRIEND?!!!!!!!!!!” Jonghyun gasped.
YES, AKIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
“ Are you talking about the girl with that nice dimple(don’t kill me Irah) we met at the lunchroom?”
HAHA. nice dimple? Yes, you sure had nice dimples. So, I know Minho said this. I know it just bu 'Don't kill me Irah' HAHA. Eyaaa, Minho remember your face at all. Cubatah aku ah!
“ who elsee~~~~~~~” Jonghyun started singing in a high tone.
Aiii, cutee~ macam Jo kown. HAHA.
Wait, I am confused. Si kanata Hongo to childhood bestfriend Taemin kah Qil? OMG! You're so lucky. Both of them are falling in love with you & I'm left alone with no one. HAHA. Kanata Hongo aku bah. Iaa sweet ah. Jk! I still want JH & Mitsu.
We were the trouble makers of our kindergarten class when we were still toddlers. Not to mention we used to like the same teacher as well.
Taemin? troublemaker? HAHA! in a cute way ofcourse. Like the same teacher? Aiiii, they sure had same taste in girl. First, Their teacher & now, It's a girl that's cute and have a nice dimples, YOU! HAHA.
All of a sudden, Aki’s face popped into my mind that I stopped walking.
Oww~ sweet. Atfirst, I thought it because he miss you or something but ...
“ should I give this back to her?” I took out the antique bronze coloured pocket watch from my pocket.
HAHA, so, It's because of this pocket watch. Ada bau mu bah tu, yatah ia nda mahu balikkan. Ia param dulu! HAHA

“ JJong hyung!!! Call me at 2 pm okay? Im gonna take a nap at the usual place now,” I shouted from the balcony of the Royal Music Building at them, who were going to have their lunch.
Qil,I thought You was the one that asked JH to call you at 2pm(2pm! WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA), sekali Taemin! HAHA. It's because of that jjong! HAHA
“ OHHH GODD! Mr. Tumbler is killing me softly. Two hours of practically listening to his speech is purely dreadful for such a beautiful guy like me,” Key whined while putting the food tray down at our ‘reserved’ table.
AHA, in yours, Iffah & Irah, key's character is the same. Perasan! HAHA.
& Qil, What's up with the 'reserved' table? HAHA.
I then continued to walk along the open hallway of the building and when I was about to pass the automatic glass door, I saw two people hugging near the window over the first class.
“.. Aki?” My voice came out in an unwilling tone.
Seee, My instict are good. I got it correct, Itws Taemin. He saw you & Kanata hongo hugging! Qil, How come you didn't even realise he was there? He must be sad.
“ Thanks for giving me a lift here , Kanata,” I said while I got out of his car.
Fewwwit~ Apa nieee~ Bakas ke manaa??!~
“ Don’t talk to me like that, talk to me like im a friend of yours,” I smiled sweetly. No one and yes – NO ONE CAN RESIST MY OVERLY KILLING SMILE :D
Apanyaa~ yeah, & no one can resist your crazy face that you always did in class. HAHA.
“ not trying to poke over people’s businesses, but was that your boyfriends?”
NO, It's Taemin. Trust me miss, eventhough KH is sweet,kind & romantic but Qilah love Taemin more. HAHA.
The suites which are mainly for those who could afford them and for VIP guests are on the 10th, 30th and 50th floor. Because I always find it wasteful to wait till the lift reaches the 50th floor , Mum booked one suite on the 10th floor.
Say no to high building. There's no way that I would visit you if you're in 50th floor. NO! NO! NO!
“ Oh hello Aki, The music department in Tokyo is going to send me to France tomorrow because I was chosen to be the judge for the 25th annual world’s piano competition. So, It’s sad to say, that I have to go for about two weeks. But no worries, I have a perfect someone to replace me and teach you,”
I know it was Taemin. I hope you guys will have a romantic seasion like when you guys was, in previous chapter but kanata hongo ruin everything. I am sad.
I was disappointed that she was gonna be replaced by some other teacher, But hey being picked as a music competition judge is a great honour so it’s okay.
You won;t trust me, it Taemin! You'll have another cool moment there!
I remembered this was where I bumped into Taemin. Literally speaking, he was the first the person I met at this school(aside from my best friends of course).
Eyaaaaaa, It's your destiny!!!
He was we wearing a white tshirt that says “ IM A RIDICULOUSLY HANDSOME GUY SO WATCH OUT”
Key??! Or Minho? assymetrical bangs? It's key!!!
“ for lighting up our not-so-cheerful-anymore Taemin,” He gave me a sweet smile. “ and if you insist on hanging out with me, you might get punished,” he pointed at the large clock which shows that it was just three minutes to half past seven.
HAHA. caliiii! Cheerful jua taemin, atupun ada kau. HAHA. cutee eyh!
I love Taemin & YOU!
It was Izumi’s fault actually, She saw a cute black cat at the school compound when the morning session ends and ended up clinging on me while crying – self explanatory, she was scared of cats
AHHA. I bet that must be true. Iffah, in Irah & Qilah story, there must be you & cat. HAHA. great!
Not only that surprised me, but the fact that he wasn’t smiling and teasing me like he usually does bothers me as well. He had a serious look on his face and then he turned to me “ you’re late,”
I know there will be a fight. he's jealous over you. come on! HAHA. Bad mood tarus!
“ are you alright?” I asked seeing his weird conditions. “ You looked slightly off today”
He's jealous! OMG OMG!!!!! Qilah! OMG!!!
“ is he crazy ?” I rolled my eyes after being left alone in this room.
LOL at this, he was mad & you said this? HAHA. cool Aki!
“Hey even rape can happen at school,” Kanae lectured me off when I told her I went touring the school this morning alone.
You do both of you have in mind?
Serious taemin look like Heechul but still hot!
Yes, I am really disappointed. The only romantic part were when you was with kanata Hongo. I want it to be with Taemin. I love when you guys are joking around. He bully you.

chapter 6
I gasped inaudibly while trying my best to remain calm. But then something grabbed my arms tightly that I started to scream!
HAHA, what a mind Qil! You become a pessimist again. & It was kind of scary but when I know it was kanata hongo, then nevermind. HAHA
The grasp then seemed to tighten and as I was about to scream again his other hands was covering my mouth. I felt helpless. That person then shook me..
he touched you. He touched you. I was again disappointed. What if Taemin see this? Nda apa ko Qil! HAHA
“ Im really sorry that I scared you ,” He gave me a hand and pulled me up back to my feet.
Agaaaain? TAEMIN AAAAA!!
“.. a kidnapper?” he finished off my sentence and gave me a smile.
Kidnapper? HAHA. It's like too different? HAHA. A handsome kidnapper for sure. Gimme, Gimme more! ko nyanyi atukan tadi? HAHA
“ Stop being a pessimist Aki!” Saori gently shook my right shoulder. “ Look, the arranged marriage is gonna be pushed further so you have more time to plan on what to do at that time”
yeah, It seem like you want to get marry sooner. HAHA. Jk. I guess, your secret bridegroom is Taemin. Am i right? Oww, that sweet!!
“ And one more! Someone’s going on a date tomorrow!!” Shuuko emerged all of a sudden from the bathroom with curlers sticking on her head.
& when I imagine Irah with that hair, it's kind of funny. Macam maci! HAHA
“ I think it’s more that ,” Izumi looked at Kanae and nodded her head, followed by Kanae in agreement.
“ Moreover, he seems to be trying to get closer to you these days,” Saori nudged my elbow.
Yeah I agreed, Andang jua aku agreed. HAHA. fatin & Iffah selalu tu catu. good Qil! HAHA.
Awuuu eyh, Taemin canaa???
“ duh, im his childhood annoying neighbor and also a friend’s sister, why wouldn’t he?” I climbed down my King sized bed and poured water into a glass at a nearby table.
It's more than that. He's sticking with you 24/7. Don;t you realise??
“ OMGGG MY JONGHYUN IS ON THE TVV!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” Saori shouted with her high pitched that would be much more advantageous if it is used in dangerous situations instead of this moment when I was reminiscing. Then the others joined her and started squealing.
My JH! Guys, MY JH!!! HHAHA. *sakai!
What do you mean by that? huh? is that a sarcasm? Aiiiiii~~ menyamal ku eyh.
Then how about Taemin? Why am I thinking of him? Why was his serious expression bothers me greatly?
Let me tell you something Qil, You love him thats why. You're worry about your realtionship with him meaning You care about him.
Then how about Kanata Hongo, do I still like him?
Just say no! No!
“ Oh no, im sorry, I was just .. “ I tried to think of an excuse. “ YES! I was trying to memorize Chemistry for tomorrow’s test”
chemistry? HAHA. chemistry of love?
But if it was really him… why was he in this hotel? Was that girl his girlfriend?
Tuakah? bukan his mom?
“ I cant even hardly forget how it tastes like, I can still feel it,” Saori said dreamily while looking at the ceiling. Maybe his ghost boyfriend was there floating up at the ceiling.
What am I talking about? food kan? HAHA. My ghost Bf = JH :)
“ Of course no, you monkey, that one,” Izumi turned my head at where Taemin was sitting.
iffah called you monkey? HAHA.
“ Let’s go,” Kanata Hongo was smiling sweetly at me probably trying to not burst into laughter after seeing me eating the pudding like a pig.
What do you mean by 'eating like a pig?' The pink pig?
OMG! Qilah want to be a pink pig :P
HAHA. jk. Iknowwhatthatsupposttomeanbytheway :)
“ where to?” I tilted my head – bad habit I tell you.
I guess, this only happen to me, now it's your turn. HAHA
I looked at my friends while still feeling a little bit off, All of them were smiling like they were being frozen just like that and then shot me a “ COME ON AND GO WITH HIM” look which scared the heck out of me.
OMG! We're scary! I can imagine our face with that look! *goose-flesh
HAHA Btw, we won't give that look in real life because we like Taemin more than Kanata Hongo.
I know you'll say "He's sweet and kind to me" I know,but somehow he just make your relationship with taemin become worse.
“ um I-“ I tried to say something when he grabbed me by the hand and pulled me away.
He touched you? INFRONT of Taemin???!
OMG~! guys you really need to give her a BIG comment on this one.
did I mention he was one of the school’s heartthrob?
I know, Still Taemin's the best! HAHA
He was still grasping my hand tightly. I don’t know why, but I felt happy and embarrassed at the same time.
Touched you again? Yaa~ kanata Hongo-shi, you better stop touching her! HAHA *iamnotjealous!
&&& Qil, YOU FELT HAPPY? I am pissed! HAHA.
Why? Wish he is Taemin :)
.. just something that made my heart moved a little faster than the usual.
What? ARE YOU IN LOVE WITH HIM?? Taemin????
*emosional as always. Don't mind me.
Aii, You was going to Harajuku without bringing us alone? guys, Let's cry!
...afraid that I might get lost among the crowd.
Owhhh, sweet, but still! I love Taemin more!
“ Glad to see you smile this..” He said while handing me the plastic bags of clothes which I bought earlier.
Aiii, he even bring that for you? Sweet! No! Taemin are more sweeter than him!
“ Good to know then. We should go out again next time,” He put his hand on my shoulder and then gently push me into the opened lift.
Next time? yeah? do you mind bringing us? HAHA. & Taemin, & also Shinee. But then, they'll fight over you! trust me!
“ Oh for the sake of the stars above, I need to go on a diet!!” Saori whined while fiddling were her tummy.
LOL! Sound just like me! yeah guys, I need it!
bagus Qil, Where do you get the idea from? HAHA
Star above? HAHAHHA!!!! panat!
“ There are no stars at the sky right now,” Me and Izumi looked at each other and then laughed at Saori’s silliness.
grrrrrr~ I'll kill the both of you. Yeah, both of you and fatin always did this to me.
*pityme!
“ Oh well, whatever, I just gained 0.5 kg!!,” She whined even louder.
Whaaaat? HAHA. I was really dramatic here. but,0.5kg?*knockthewoodnearme3times
I don't want that.
“ That’s a literal translation of how much you don’t care about your looks Aki. Tsktsk” Shuuko looked at me ruefully.
yeah, agree much! But she's obsess on being tall. Just like my obsession on being thinner :)
“ Taemin?” I tilted my haid while trying hard not to stumble upon something while being tugged by this guy.
I like this part. Wow, I guess it's another romantic part but a suspend one!*sinceIalreadyreadchapter8soiknowwhathappened.
He touched you, not in a nice way btw.
I was so puzzled by his actions at that time that I didn’t even there to look at his face and then suddenly, he pushed me on the couch ( just simply pushed me on where you usually leans on when youre sitting on a couch not the one where you can find in romantic Korean movies – I know what youre thinking) and had his hands against where I was pushed onto.
What are we thinking?
Aaaaa~ Qilah ahh, What've you watch? HAHAHA, Eyaa~
OMG! I am really jealous of you.
Adore Taemin's action here :)
“ I was waiting for you the whole day yesterday, didn’t you know,” He panted slowly.
Let me guess, you don't remember your appointment with him? URGGHHH! QILAAAAH~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

MG♥

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date/time Friday, November 13, 2009,10:50 PM

Comments especially for aki n irah!!!

Hey bachelorettes!

Heyya! On this post again, i will comment on irah's and aki's story.

Aki's story
haha i told u arh wall fb mu just now, that i wnt be leaving u any cmment. Afraid that i will make you cry! Well, the story is INSANELY AWESOME, qil, but, a little disappointd though, that there's no romantic scene between you and taemin, but still qil, REALLY AWESOME!! Hahaha lol at mg time ia ckp "my jh is on tv!" haha, oh and omg qil, you made taemin jealous! Ksian! Time, ku bca yg taemin nmpk kanata hongo nampak kau, i was like wpwmpgwgxpjg! Im pissed with kh! Really, uh! Haha! Just being emo rding the story! Haha! N qil, siapakn yg dgn kau arrngd marriage a?! I desperately want to know but im guessing taemin! Oh please let him be! So qil, continue!

Irah's
ah, ir! Cali crita mu a, yg part key n faten n also time midah n jh! Hahahaha roflmao! Aku imagne time, jh wink arah mg, hahahahaha, roflol!! Midah adakh bangang! Hahaha n yg mata faten berair atu, i was really gonna laugh, but then, inda, psl ko udah bgitau d skulah! Spoiler ko ane ir, eh! N yg qilah tipu taemin,hahaha!Hahahahahaha, cli ir! Sambung!

N yeah, i hope u all enjoy my story. N congrats to aki n nad! We'll be cheering for u guys nanti! N nad, aku dah liat yg psl poklen vs intrnt dtng a! Cli!

Love u guys as always, iffah

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date/time 8:56 AM

comments for aki's anf iffah's fict. sorry pendek.

so now that exams are over...my family might find me in three places...ONE: the kitchen (the place i want to go to right after blogging), TWO: in front of the TV and THREE: in front of the pc. why? continuing the fict of course :) and also reading aki's and iffah's.

Comment for Aki's Fict
i still dont get why you thought i would kill you for the nice dimple thingi....HAHAHA. and taemin jeolous kannnnnnnn?????? wuuuuuu, suka ku and let me guess, the arrange marriage is with TAEMINNNNNN kan????? have to be him. and kanata hongo is the one who disturbed you two, something like that, kannnn????? hahaha. sambung qil sambunggg!

oh, and i still like the part when he leaned his head on yours. haha, atu majal aku ah!

Comment for Iffah's Fict
Shinhwa...i wonder where you get that name. and MINHOOOOOOO wrapped his jacket around me. woohhoo!! and iya bagi BOTH chocolates AND roses! haha, lagi sukaa! sambung iffah! because the last part i've been reading was when minho hugged taemin to woke him up. SAMBUNGGG and i'll continue my story in which onew hugged you. haha, spoil aku a! kan aku anak baik, X)

oh yes, just to let kamu tau, Vega and Colinia were the name of the country i got from fictionpress in the web and mind you, you wont find them in the world's map, either past or present, for they were created by the author. (iffah, dari cerita you can't crack iron bah ni...) i was thinking of the other two houses though. X)

love, irah

now, to the kitchennnnnnn!

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date/time Monday, November 9, 2009,9:03 PM

Hello bachelorettes! :)

so, this post is especially for our dear qilah who insisted on crying if i ddn't leave any commnt for her story haha dnt worry qil, ur story is insanely awesme! Since im a good uppa... Hehe
so in chptr 1, u said that izumi n kanae are what u n saori loves to cll the prfct bully-er, i agreed with half of it, that kanae(not me) is a perfct bully-er! Though, i do bully u guys ( aki n mg), sometimes, hehe!XD N i cmpletely agree with 'saori's voice, obviously, those hgh-ptched of hers are one in a million!' lol haha xD!

Chptr 2--> omg qil! Uniformnya lwa! N omg qil! Ur imagintn lwa yg psl the school a! N yg grdn atu, aaah xD Aku imagn tane sma SHINee picnic! Yg mcm S.A a! AAAAAAAAAAAAAHhhhhhhhhXD!!!!!!!! Taemin a jhat!! Ia ucp Aki stalkng ia! PRASAN! He has a sweet smile and a cute, one in a million RABBIT teeth! Hahahahaha rofl! Cute!xD! N u said that it's onew!! Aaaaahhh! Cute! N jhat ko qil, monkeys? Jhat! N yg mg ckp psl hunks a! Hahaha!

Chptr 3--> aaaah! Qilah, ryuuto hot! Ah! Jdikn darlng ku qil! N then onew jelous c(x! Hahaha ndawh jk! Bgi sja mg! Aaah qilah ada romantic scene sma taemin! Ah qil, i envy u!

Chptr 4! Rofl at you psl ko gugur! Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!! N when kanae said, 'for the sake of hnsme guys, are u hding smethng frm us,' hahahahaha that is so not like faten to say that! N qil, jhat ko pnggil tm conceitd airhead!!!! Sexy nicknmes? Right... Aah! In ths chptr, ada lgi romantic scene! Ah, i envy u even more!

Chptr 5! Aaah! Cute aa taemin a! Ia teased kau! Hahahaha n time ur mum nagging psl ur safety a! Lol! N you n ur negative thinking! Adakh arranged marriage! Wait, is that for real? Please let us know qil, so continue! Continue! Its a must! Dont make uppa sad! Klau nda aku nangis ne...
Hope these comments make u continue the story, or better yet, abiskan with happy endings!

Love u guys as always,
onew's iffah

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date/time 3:32 PM

Qilah, another comment arrived.

You know, It's getting romantic chapter by chapter. what happen to you? HAHAA, & It's the bomb. I repeat BOMB, not BAAAM. HAHA.

Hey, I think taemin gots really sweet in this chapter. He's not a jerk anymore. It's just you! Don't be an optimis Qil.

“ ACKK !” I screamed as I fell off my piano bench in my try of backing away from him. I seriously have no idea when can all these fallings ever get away from me.
I wish you'll fall on him instead of that piano bench. Huh! kacau eyh, When you fall on him, you know, he'll catch you & then, another romantic part just happen. Really really wish that could happen.

As I struggled to get back to my feet, Taemin laughed while slightly covering his mouth – typical superstars. I then started to laugh unintentionally as well.
Owww, I can imagine how the cute taemin would look like when he did that. WOOO~ & this is sweet. When both of you laugh, you guys gets close. Oww~

When I was just about to give up, Taemin held me by my upper arms and helped to pull me back up. No matter how much of an annoying airhead he is, His nice side like this can make even the hardest heart to melt.
He touched you! OMG again! He touched you! *This is how sakai I'm reading this fanfic of yours Qil.
You heart melted? Oww, now, your ice princess attitude is going to melt. Owww, First, you hate him. Now, You can't even be apart with him. You heart seems to avoid him. But deepest inside it, You want him always close to you. that is because 'you're totally deep in love with him' HAHA. Now, I'm going crazy.
Puke as you want!

“ But seriously don’t you ever do that again !” I complained.
“ Do what?” He asked.
“ oh you mean this ?” He then lowered his head inches apart from mine again and then backed it off after bursting into laughter.
“ You… just.. did .. that.. again!!!!!!!!!” I stomped one of my foot on the wooden floor.
Oww, now, you guys start joking with each other. Wooow~ That's really sweet.
I wonder what'll happen next. HAHAHHAHA*my witch laugh again!

“ Told you teacher, Who wont get along with such a friendly and generous guy like me ,” He complimented while sitting back on his piano chair and then gave me a short glance while smirking – SCARREHHH. Urghhh!
Teamin is such a jerk. HAHA! Sorry Taemin. But seriously, he's cool! HAHA, Qil, His attitude is awesome.
“He’s such a conceited airhead” I shouted to myself.
See~ you're doing it again. Don't do that. Okay? he's kind to you. kesian ia tuu! Dangar Hyung mu!

“ Becareful you might get tripped over and something much more embarrassing than yesterday might happened again ,” He hollered from the small crowd of rustling students in the lobby.
He then emerged and as usual, he flashes his ohmysoo dazzling smile at me and pointed at my Dark green Nike shoes “ Remember you’re wearing a skirt ,”
HAHA, What's up with green nike shoes huh? it's really weird. Mentang2 tani punya school uniform is green. Woo!
Wait, He's taking care of you! Can't you realize that miss Qilah? He's in love with you already. This Girl really need some tutor on this matter.

You managed to rise up and early today, I see ,” She said while reading her biology book in one hand.
Am I a nerd? OMG! Please don't make me a nerd qil. I'll kill you if you did! HAHA,BAD HYUNG~

“ Oh yes, I saw someone that looked like Taemin talking to you just now, who’s that?,” She asked finally putting her book away as she reached our classroom.
“ well, Actually, that IS Taemin ,” I emphasized the ‘IS’ part making half of the class to stare at me especially the girls.
I'm a stupid who doesn't know taemin? *kill myself! HAHA. At least, I'll realize JH by my side. Kan Qil? Qil, Just say yes!

You called taemin AIRHEAD? OMG!!!!
“ Oh they’re the famous Korean band, SHINee, They moved to Japan because their youngest member had to go to Japan because of, according to their hardcore fans, his parents. So they looked at bright side, and decided to go to Japan with him with the aim of improving their Japanese to make it easier for them to enter the market ,” Shuuko explained while I yawned dramatically.
OMG! Too much Information Irah, You're our dictionary and information book from now on.

“what?” I paused in disbelief. “ So you guys are choosing him over me?”
“ Fine! Ill go back to London ,” I jokingly stirred.
“ Do that and we’ll kidnap you and drown you deep under the Marianas Trench (the deepest ocean trench in the world in phillipines).
“ OMG!! You guys are making me feeling dizzy! “ Even the ants know how I deeply hate the deep blue sea. I Personally think that I’d rather encounter a ghost than having to swim that deep.
LOL at this. Wow, We're so Cool! especially Iffah & fatin, HAHA. Just like Omma & oppa, & a bullier for sure. KWAHAHAHA!
Yeah, I wonder if we do it How'll Qilah react? JK Qil. We're not that bad. we still need you here. ehhh~ It not just us, Taemin need you too! HAHA

“ What are you, really? A nagging old grandma? “ I smirked at him.
LMAO! How dare you calling him by that name. He's a gentleman who is taking care of you now. But you just... You break my heart. HAHA. JK.

“ Nope. But a handsome heartthrob that you stalks ,” He teased.
OMG! Perasan ehhh! You need to hit his head QIL. just once!

Seriously, his mouth is what I felt should be sewed forever.
You can't or maybe you won't be able to? HAHA. You won't dare to hurt someone that you love. & anyway, if you sewed his mouth, how can you be able to hear a LOVE WORDS from him? HAHA. see? get the point?

“ Well, if you have read the school rules, It’s okay for guys to wear these kind of shoes but for girls, it should be feminine ones ,” He started lecturing like an old granny again.
Owww, his sweet side again. He want to look at your feminine side. Owwww~ *going crazy.

“ Kidding, I know you’re not anyway,I can see that you have a not-fully developed S line ,” He chuckled softly.
Is he observing you body line? Taemin!! You're only 18. is he? HAHA!

“ Hey! You can sit at your chair ,” I said trying to fight off with him for spaces. We’re sitting right at this chair with our backs against each other.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA, he want to be close with you. Seriously, now you guys really can't be apart. Cool! He's deeply inlove now. Lovesick huh?

He then leaned his head on my head.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA~
what is this? that should be me! HAHA! JK. He's yours. But still, I'm really jealous to hell.

p/s: You said 'Your comments are my motivations :3'
Then, my comment is the most motivate right? HAHA!

Chapter 5, be patient :)

You know, when he's sad about hate-me-not thingy I was like, Owowww, he's going to cry now. What'll happen next? did Qilah hug him? HAHA.
& I'm a bit disappointed when he's only joking. HUH! Taemin, stop you annoying attitude. Be romantic now. HAHA. Nadadeyh, It if is not for him annoying attitude, it won't be fun. kan?

“ Then do you like me ?”
“ WHATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT?!!! “ I got off my seat and yelled on top of my lungs.
Why do you said that when he asked you that question? HUH! You know, you should answer 'yes my romeo, I love you! HAHA. JK. Not unless you love me first!' THAT!!!

“ I.. I didn’t mean it,” I tried to cheer him up, to no avail.
Oww, so you also like him huh? HEHEH~ you don't want him to hate you huh? OWOW, Qilah got a lovesick over Taemin~ NA~ NA~ NA~

And then he sat right beside me on the same chair again – FOR THE SECOND TIME. Only this time, we’re side to side instead of back to back.
Oww~ I'm melting over your love story. He really like you. SWEEEEET~ COOL~ ADORABLE~

“ Actually.. I don’t have one,” He muttered.
He's telling you so that You'll know that he's single & want to be yours. Get it? Oww~

“ a girlfriend ,” He then shifted his gaze to me and that made my heart moved a little.
AAAA~ Qilah's in love. So, you have that kind of feeling huh? cheeeyh, you want to be his girlfriend huh? you're happy that he's single huh? OMMMMMMMMG!!

“ I still cant find any that suits my taste and likings,” He gave a little smile and then turned to me all of a sudden “ Why? You wanna be one?”
See? He even asked you. He find that you're the girl that he's searching for this whole time! Why don't you say yes instead of this,
“ TAEMINNNNN STOP TEASING ME!!! “ I hit him on the arm again.
what kind of answer is this?

“ That’s because you’re super astoundingly hilarious to tease moreover your reaction towards these stuffs, Well, I find it rather cute,” He gave me a sweet smile. The word ‘Cute’ repeatedly echoed in my head.
“ SEE!! YOU’RE EVEN BLUSHING!! “ He fell off the chair and then collapsed after laughing.
OMG! He said you cute! BWAHAHA! He like you! someone is blushing as red as chilli right now? OWWWW, QILAAAAH, This is awesome! && Taemin, you're a jerk now. Why do play with her heart & shyness? I'm going to kill you even more now!

I then covered my cheeks in embarrassment. I find him really annoying when I first met him at school, but it seems like my feelings were starting to change after spending quite a lengthy of time with him.
This is what I called, love that start with hate but it's sweet. So how does it feel qil? HUHU~

“ hey!” He waved his hand in front of my face “ What were you thinking about?”
taemin, He's thing about you now! comeone qil, tell him! HAHA

I bet I was blushing as red as someone who’d ran thousand kilometre “ one thing for sure is that, Im not cute!”
You're cute. && hate this part. Mrs gain suree spoil the moment. can't you a little longer? huh! I want to know what taemin's going to say when this humble lady said she's not cute. Yeaah right~ ko cute bah Qil!!

“ Listen before you guys go any further, I do not want any kind of romance in this room ,”
Dirty miss gain. HAHA. && Qilah, you likeee it huh? HAHA. JK.

“emotions ,” She said in an assuring voice.
yeah, you really need one. express your emotion when you're playing with taemin. Understand?? *I sound like a mother now!

Saori’s in the Theatre and broadcasting class – she strongly likes to act and is really hoping that she would be casted for the next upcoming stage theatre,
What? Am my acting skills that bad? HUUHUU~ HAHA
Shuuko is in the lego and chemicals class – Well, this class suits her over-the-top IQ,
Agree much. Your Iq need to be lower for a bit so give the other to mine! HAHA
Izumi is in the music class – the same as me only that the floor and time was a bit different and her timetable changes almost all the time
HAHA, she's with Onew I suppost.
while Kanae is in the sports club – Self explanatory once you see her in a race.
Yes, I hate it when she leave me behind when running. Kill fatin! HAHA

“ Then it wont be called a surprise. But glad to know you’re happy about it. We miss you so much, Take care, DON’T BE IN A ROOM ALONE WITH A GUY ( me and Taemin was alone in the piano room just now)! DO NOT EVEN WANDER AROUND THE SCHOOL ALONE( I even did that yesterday)! DO NOT TALK TO A STRANGER ( I talked to Onew yesterday)! DO NOT LET A GUY TOUCH YOU ( Taemin practically touched a little bit of my hand when he was teaching me practicing my piece yesterday) DO-“
LOL! You sound like a baby. AHHA. LMAO. Be careful, look like your mum knows everything. HAHAH. You're in trouble Qil. But if she know that Taemin touched you, she'll be grateful about it because taemin is such a good caring & a gentlemen.

Suddenly, the idea of ‘arranged marriage’ dawned on me.
Owww, owwww, I'm looking forward to that part. Arranged married with kanata Hongo? HAHA, left Hachi behind huh? he's mine then :P

“ … Kanata .. Hongo.. senpai ?” I stuttered. Nervousness cracked down my voice that I sounded like I was being tramped to death.“ Im really happy to see you. You even remember my name Aki,” He smiled and then pulled me towards him all of a sudden and hugged me!!!
Wooo hooo~ A hot guy hugged you huh? Then, who'll hug me? ask him to give me one tooo! HAHA, JK qil.

p/s: continue writing! Don't stop. I'll kill you if you do! I want more! Mummy, I want more. What'll happen next??

Owwww~

Iraaaah, you fanfic, I just read the prolog. esok aku baca & comment yeah? panjang nie. Baca prologmu dah aku mcm kaling. HAHA. get it? HAHA!

JH♥MG

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date/time Saturday, November 7, 2009,9:00 PM

Aki's fanfic comment.

I know, you hate this comment or maybe not. HAHA, What am I talking about?

Okay, Chapter 1's comment:

I ♥ your conversation with Nad, its really sweet. You're a bad friend. You
always left us! *crying. JK Qil, don't take it seriously. & You used BOO in
this chapter. Which I like it very much. HAHA, it's great! See, singing chris
brown's songs in class sure have it's own benefit ( NOT!! ) HAHA.
When you
meet shinee, can't you atleast react? OMG! You're too naive & Your character
cute & Rebelious. LOL at Ronald MacDonald's(you even write the full name
LAMO) hair.
I shouldn’t have high hopes on him flirting with me. A gorgeous
guy and me? Will never work out.
That sentence, is that mean that yo
actually have a SMALL hope for HIM to flirting with you? OMG!! If I make one,
I'll really gonna make him flirt for you! A gorgeous guy'll flirt with you Qil.
Stop being humble of I'll make you swim in the ocean. Get me?
We're so sweet
when we hug. AND ALERT GUYS! 'AKI CRIED'! HAHA. How many hours did we talked?
OMG! 6 o'clock? That's long..

100% agree with this statement
'Saori
is a 17 year old, optimistic and smart girl. She’s the daughter of the XXX
company director, She loves hot guys – well, who doesn’t, she usually always
fall for the good-looking prince like type while I always fall for a guy with a
hidden talent, dazzling smile and serious.' especially at the GUY PART.
'Kanae and Izumi is 16 year old like me. Both of them are what me and Saori
loves to call, the perfect bully-er, they, no doubt, always bully people – but
they’re awesome to be around with, no doubt.'
More agree on this one. Yeah,
Both of them are adrable bullier.
And lastly, Shuuko, the youngest, 15, is
the mature one from us despite her age, she has a wild imagination as well, like
I do, and loves fairytales.
HAHA, Even more on this one. Iraaah &
fairytale = can't be apart.

“DO NOT EVEN TELL ME THAT YOURE STILL ON
BED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” Saori’s voice, obviously, those high-pitched of hers
are one in a million.
WHAT IS THAT? OMG! YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HAHA, At
least, at chapter 2 there's Onew's part where there's also word 'one in a
million' (SEKADAR) HAHA. Nda bah Fah!

Chapter 2 time~

Okay, That's cute when you're eating LARGE FRENCH BREAD & DRINKING HOT
CHOCOLATE in that high-class car as your breakfast? Hope That'll happen to me!
OMG!
I don't know that your driver with have his humourous part as well.
HAHA, You as primary school student? crack me more!

You know, I was
going crazy about our school name! HUH! *dreaming~

'....BAMMMM my back
hit something.. or someone. ' aku ingat the other BAAAM. HAHA.
okay, stop it
Midah!

LOL at this. You're suppost to ask him.
“okay, you know, I
was gonna ask for help but forget it , I might get a high blood pressure just by
talking to you, Have a nice day!” I trailed off.
A seriously disgusting act
to do since when you’re lost and an angel came to bring you to heaven but you
rejected and chose your own path which might even take you to hell.

Okay, there's the thing.
First, You call us BANANAS? OMG!
then,MONKEYS? HAHA, WILL KILL YOU SOON.

“ Since London and America (I
lived there for a year as well) are filled with hunks, did you get yourself
one?” Saori teased. Ah, the common topic they’ll talk about, boyfriend. You see,
in us, Saori is the ‘experienced’ one. She started having one on her last year
of elementary school, impressive, no? but then she stopped having them after she
hangs out with us AHAHHAHA

WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT IS
THAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT? 'experienced
one? OMG! Am I? I stop having boyfriend because I'm in love with JH? Okay! AHA
crazy much. Qil, the 'experienced' one still make me insane. YOU! GRRRRR~ HAHA!

owhh, I was wrong. It's chapter 2. HAHA. Sorry
The one that stood at
the front was quite tall but actually shorter from the rest, he kind of
resembles a dinosaur, his haircolour was dark brown at the back and then
it seems to grow into a lighter blonde as it reaches his face. JH!
What do
you mean by dinosaur? He looks cute. Wait. Am I wrong? His smile? OWWW, I'm
melting~

The other one that was next to him has a seriously awesome
haircut. His hair was black with a little highlight of purple on his assmetrical
bangs. KEY?
The tallest one was handsome as well, he had a cute smile and is
probably the manliest of all. should be Minho? right?

Waaait, Let me
guess. Did taemin already in &hearts with you when he laugh at your
expression? OWW that made this story more SWEET & ROMANTIC.

Chapter 3 now,

she stood up then took the hand mirror that Kanae and Izumi were playing with at
the corner and began to start her narcissm. WHATTTT? HAHA, am I that crazy?
HAHA, sure need to take some medicine to kill this attitude. HAHA, embarassed
me. Why do yu have to mention it? AAAA~

I wish it was Kanata Hongo that
approached you. Skalinya Ryuuto, cuba tah aku! HAHA.
Wow, Your mum's cool
when she actually ask the principle to put your in that piano club. Love your
mum here.

Qilah I don't know that you really love Gain that much! HAHA!

Aku imagine that piano room, lawa tu eh! Qil, YOU & YOUR BRILLIANT
IMAGINATION~ HUH! SO COOL!

“ AKI!,” she gasped and then hugged me.
What the, Am I her long lost daughter or something?
HAHHAHAHAHAHHA! LOL!
Caliii, seriously, HAHA.

It's your destiny to be with taemin. Can't you
just relize it & start dating him? & one more thing. stop hating him.
He's cool!

Qil, I realize something. Aki always looks at taemin's face
right? Oww that sweet. Cubatah taemin ada mcm Mo ryong yang ia ckap 'am I that
handsome' & make yu blush! OMG!! HAHA

He then coolly walked towards
me and then stood behind me with his head lowered at the same level as mine next
to my head.
“ First as you can see, the key is A flat major so..” his soft
auburn hair brushed softly against my cheeks and his voice was just so soft that
I can hardly focus on what he was saying.
Oh my god, we’re like so close,
NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!

okay so yes this is the first time I got this
close with a guy and HECK I ASSURE YOU MY HEART IS THUMPING VIOLENTLY*that is
what you call love*. I MUST SAY IM A BIT SCARED AS WELL OF BEING THIS CLOSE, I
DON’T KNOW WHY, I MEAN HE’S JUST A GUY,
“ Hey !,” he shook my right shoulder
lightly “ are you even listening? “ he looked at me.

I then slowly
turned to him when he was staring right at me. Without realizing how close we
actually are, Our gaze met. And yes, I think a volcano just erupted!

OMG! LOVE IS IN THE AIR. HAHA QIL, LOVE IS IN THE AIR. YOU'RE IN LOVE.
HAHA

What A romantic part Qil, You better continue it. My curiousity is
killing me! Is there any BAAAM happen? EYAAA!

P/s: Am my comment that long? I'm sorry.I felt asleep tadi. I planned to read & give comment after checking my FB kali lalai. SORRY QIL/ HOPE You'll forgive this adorable crazy SAORI. Will yaa? I know my mistake. Sorry. ILY. I'm sorry. Kill me, If that make you statisfy. Wooo, I'm over now!

QIL, IF YOU DON'T CONTINUE THIS STORY A.S.A.P I'LL KILL YOU. I REALLY MEAN IT.I AM A BIG FAN NOW. I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPEN AFTER YOU&TAEMIN... YOU KNOW! HAHA, GOOD LUCK. LOVE YAAAH! DON'TFORGETTHEBAAAAAMPART. IT'S THE MOST IMPORTANT! HAHA. I'M GONG CRAZY. BETTER STOP NOW.

MG♥JH

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date/time 8:19 PM

Hello, bachelorettes :).

Im not quite happy today, :( the news about my dear onew dpt swine flu upsets me, BERABIS! Ksian onew!!;( ;( ;( ;(

newy, lpas blik skulah tdi, i was hoping to read qil's story as soon as i got home, but sadly, i forgot, irah pinjam my pndrive. Hopefully, i'll read it on monday. So, ir, don't forget to bring it on mon.

N qil, you asked me to cntinue my story, right? So, yes, i'll cntinue but i can't bring it on mon, hehe pndrve arh ir. But i'll try to borrow my mum's. Hehe hopefully, ia suruh.

N ir, pakn yg ko tlis rah cbox atu? Jelous psl pa? Bngang jua ku ne! Hehe newy, good luck on the practicl exms! Wish me luck too! Doakn aku! Aku doakn kmu jua!

Love u all as always,
iffah

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