Chapter 10's comments ♥
I was practically out of the world already, Trying to think a solution but failed to come out with one. Oh shoot oh shoot oh shoot oh shoot this is horrible this is horrible this is horrible.
Horrible? It seems to be the opposite for me! AHA. That watchman is rock. ILHIM
“ Are you okay? You looked like a morbid wide eyed rotten beggar just now,” He put on a worried expression which gradually changes into a sarcastic devilish expression.
Beggar? That’s rude! Why don’t you show him your puppy face look? Oww, he’s worried about you! High-5! & why does his expression change? What have you done?
“very funny Taemin. We’re locked, and what’s more worse is that.. we’re alone!,” I stood up and looked around the vast wooden floored room in search of something useful that could be use to break out of the room.
*GASP! ALONE??! HAHA. Why do you want to break it? There won’t be any romantic-moment-that-i-like-so-much part!
“ Im always funny didn’t you know?” He rose. “ And cute too,” He added while leaning against the wall where I was leaning on as well and then folded his arms.
Now it’s start again~ HAHA. Key umma, this comes from you! You shouldn’t make him become this way!
“shut up Taemin, there are a lot of guys who is much more cuter than you,” I placed my palm on my forehead to ease the pain I was feeling inside of my head.
Are you sure Qil? Is that words come really deep from you heart? HAHA. Is there’s any, Tell me who?
For me, JH is more cuter! JK
“ what?” I cried out in surprise. “ why did you bring him up again?” I turned to him to face him while he had his eyes looking at the ceiling.
I’m suppost, He’s jealous? He really want to know what you think about KH(give up will ya?!). Sweet! He was looking at the ceiling? Just like I always do? HAHA *beingcrazy!
“ Well, truth to be told.. He’s good looking but- “ Before I could continue. He treaded heavily to the black couch against the wooden floor as if he was intending to crush them. He sat on the couch with his arms folded and looked away from where I was standing.
Now he’s mad. & That is all your fault. You shouldn’t tell him that! You should say this, “yeah, but you’re more good-looking than him & I love you more!’ Btw,have you know your real feeling to both of them?
“ Do not even back away from me,” He said in a stern voice and then turned himself like an officer to me “ It’s easy really, yes or no?”
Owwww~ Sweet! Yeah don’t you even dare. Ditch KH & let him be with me! HAHA
I stood up to make sure that he wont see my blushing face. “ You should at least think of something useful that could get us out of here instead of thinking about those kind of things,”
Why did you blush? Is it because of KH or Taemin? HAHA. He just want to get the chance asking this kind of love matter with you. Tell him that you love him. FASTER OR I WILL TAKE HIM AWAY FROM YOU!
In a matter of split seconds he wrapped his left arm around my shoulders and whispered chillingly. “ I was just teasing you,”
Am I wrong? Did he teased you or he just want to know the truth? Love the part when he wrapped him hand around you shoulder *SHRIEKING! OMG
As he whispered those word to my ears I practically shoved him away and fell back to the couch in surprise while covering my mouth in embarrassment. I don’t like people touching my neck or well, do anything to my neck and seeing as by whispering, I could practically feel his well, nearness to me.. or my neck, It’ll make me run away like a mad hogwash.
Cool! HAHA. He is so romantic. Really romantic I mean! *yourimaginationisabit…youknow!
“ Are you crazy ?” He said while pulling himself up after being pushed lying on the cold floor by the staggered me who was still on the couch taken aback from what he did.
You pushed him? HAHA. I bet you’re blushing! HAHA
He then gave out a rather loud laugh and sat next to me while leaning on it, facing me. “ By any chance, are you scared?”
HAHA. He shouldn’t ask that question. It’s sound Stupid! HAHA. AAAA~ He was sitting next to you! Facing you? Eye-contact!! HAHA
I gave him a ridiculous look on my face and ignored his question when he suddenly got nearer to me while having one of his hand on my shoulder. He then slowly lowered his face to the frozen me.
His face is near now. OMG! I know we already had talk about this. But seriously, I still can’t get this out of my head. GAGA!
He then tried to hold his laughter in while practically failed foolishly. “ I umm… *laughs* your expressions are just astoundingly awesome to look at,”
HAHA. Isn’t that mean that he always look at you? Owwwh. Cool!
“ oh, well, we used to be neighbors and he was so close to my brother that I suddenly took a liking-“ on him – was what I was supposed to continue but then I decided to stop.
No!!you shouldn’t tell him anything! he’ll mad at you like before & then, Kanata Hongo’ll appear the most on the next chapter which unfortunately, I don’t like it! Aku mahu kau ma Taemin bah! HAHA
“ On him?” he continued my sentence and then gave of small chuckle. “ why don’t you just confess to him?” I can see that he wasn’t really smiling as genuine as he was before this.
Now he knew *madatyou! Super Mad! See? He was jealous. Me, as your love asst. should kill you until you confess your feeling towards Taemin! *angry!
It’s just that I feel really comfortable around Taemin despite all his annoyances.
What? Do you like Taemin already? Eyaaa, What a beautiful feeling!
“ Well, I feel differently about him now anyway, I don’t like him as in how I was totally infatuated over him like I used to, I like him as in the way he took a great care of me like he was actually a very close friend,”
Is it because you fell in love with Taemin? Is there any butterfly in your stomach feeling like Irah always had? HAHA. Irah is falling in love with someone! Kan? Kan?
I could see from the corner of my eye that Taemin as looking at me probably observing my weird antics. And then gave off a soft chuckle and stretched his right arm to my head and started to mess my hair up .
Cuteee! Macam cerita apa nie ah? Lupa ku! HAHA. Tapi ada nie! Yatah cutee! Eyaaaa, banyak meliat cerita Indon ko Qil? HAHA. Ceritaaa romantic saja nie diliatnya!
He then handed me the sweater leaving him only his white shirt that I think could kill him in this kind of temperature. “ put it on, It’s getting colder now,”
Owwwh, double sweetness! He was making a sacrifice just for you! You should appreciate by ….. Yah! I know, stop seeing that KH guy! Okay Qil?
“ I don’t want to to sit next to a corpse so just do as I said, okay?”
Okay, that’s rude! Corpse? Jadi hantu Qil, kali kacau Taemin. HAHA
“ Taemin, you’re not cute, now give me that back,” I demanded.
Cute kaliah Taemin!!!! Nda apa ko Qil, Taemin sama aku ja nie! HAHA. JK!
“ oh wow! This young lady knows just what I want,” he then leaned his side on the couch and looked outside. “ come to all my lessons until Ms.Ga in comes back,”
Eyaaaa, you guys will frequently meet each other then. Brilliant!!
“Hey! You know I was thinking maybe, I could, you know, bring you out this Saturday somewhere, to um… repent ?” I asked and started to rub my hands together to shake off the coldness I was feeling.
You guys will having a date. However, I know that KH guy will ruin it. I already read this. I know! & you!!! How could you sleep when he is asking for a date? GRRR~
“ just look at how you’re sleeping..” I muttered while smiling. “ just like a squirrel.. with its eyes closed of course”
Eyaaaa, Romantic eyhh! Qil, squirrel tidur buka mata wah? Aku nda tahu. HAHA!
I had her head leaning to the couch at that time when suddenly it fell without warning on my left shoulder. She looked peacefully calm while sleeping that it made me smile at the sleeping her. I then instead of moving her head back to where it was leaning before, let it leaned on my shoulder, thinking that I shouldn’t do anything more or else I might wake her up. She must’ve been really sleepy, “ .. because you fell asleep that fast” I muttered as I made my shoulder to become her sleeping pillow.
OMG! I really like this part to the max! HAHA. It was really sweet. He was watching you when you was sleeping! Oww~
I slowly opened my eyes. “ WAIT THIS ISNT MY ROOM!!” I yelled as I pounced off the couch hitting that hard thing lying on top of my head before.
Are you in Taemin’s room? Or guest’s room? COME ON!! TELL ME!! LYING ON TOR OF YOUR HEAD? WHAT IS IT???! TAEMIN’S HEAD?
She politely bowed, which I returned to her as well, and gave me a Polaroid photo of this two, who seemed to be a couple with heads depending on each other for support – the girl had her head on the guy’s shoulder while the guy had his head on top of that girl’s head. How sw- “ WHAT?!!!!”
HAHA, the sweet evidence! Cool! How can she had that picture? Who took it? KH? Impossible!
“ Im gonna make the caption as ..’when Aki borrowed my shoulder ’” He then broke into a scary smirk.
LMAO! But cute! Caliii waaaaaah!!
“ you!” I exclaimed as he disappeared into the toilet. “ yes I know! YOU ARE ONE STUBBORN CONCEITED AIRHEAD FROM MARS!”
Mars? Bagus, He is an alien then. & you’re falling in love with a very handsome alien from mars.
LOL at your mum reaction! Seriously, she was worried but then when taemin told hwe that he was with you.. It look like she LIKE it. HAHA. Weyaaa, it’s look like you guys will marry soon.
“ you!” I exclaimed as he disappeared into the toilet. “ yes I know! YOU ARE ONE STUBBORN CONCEITED AIRHEAD FROM MARS!”
Owww, cute!really cute!
“ OH MY GOD,” the four monkeys girls exclaimed in a tone which makes you wonder whether theyre exclaiming in horror/disgust/happiness/envy/ or whatever. Pretty explanatory, you exclaim this when you’re surprised, and they did this after I told them that I was locked in that room for a night with Taemin.
See? The monkeys again! Why are you calling us monkeys, you squirrel!(according to Taemin nick to you) HAHA. We were really happy for you.
“ did you two really, like, sleep together?” Shuuko gaped at me.
HAHA, that’s a really good question. Keep up the good work, Irah!
Then Kanae had her index finger moved slowly to the right and left infront of me. “ nu-uh woman, buses are filled with peoples while there were obviously no one in that dancing room except you two,”
“ and it’s soundproof,” Kanae folded her arms after mentioning that fact to me earning a stare from us.
I love you more Iffah! HAHA. Qil, you can’t deny it now!! I sure love us! HAHA
They then went berserk and turned into real monkeys jumping up and down in enthusiasm while practically turning around gaining some attention. Even SHINee looked amused at them. Why not? They’re practically jumping up and down like a bunch of kids that were given ice creams.
REAL MONKEYS? YAAAH!!! We were really happy until we can’t think of the fact that we were in the canteen where there were like hundred of people including our lovely SHINEE! GRR
Shuuko then approached me and put her hand on my shoulder. “ im proud of you,” then practically went back into that bunch of native Indians (im not racist)
Me too! WHAT INDIANS? Karang ko qil! AHA
Then they looked at each other then motioned in small circles and sang, “ LOVE TRIANGLE SOOO BIIZARREE!! LOVE TRI-“
HAHA. WHEEEEEEEEE~ isn’t we look so so happy & not to mention, crazy? Cool kan kami ah? HAHA.
KH LAGIII~ HUH!!
“ oh noes! Aki’s pissed at our evidence ! let’s run for the door,” Saori said rather dramatically earning a chuckle from Jonghyun that was near the dustbin at that time.
Me? JH? He laughed at me? AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA~ HAHA.
I look really crazy? Evidence? HAHA!
“ sorry,” he clears his throat and then turned to me. “ would you go out with me this Saturday?”
No!! Taemin already asked you. YOU KH! GO! HAHA
You’re not dreaming. It’s really Taemin. I love you & Taemin. So, who would you having a date with this Saturday?
He then stood up and then said. “ a long pause means a yes. Don’t forget it’s this Saturday!”
See? I hate him. IA MAHU DATE SAMA TAEMIN BAH KAU ANIE EYHHH!!
“ a date on Saturday, DONE!” Saori rose up from behind me while pressing some buttons on my Blackberry.
HAHA. Did i like KH here? I so don’t. In real life, awu plang. HAHA. Sibuk aku ahhh!
“ well, of course, trying to get more evidence on this..” she paused then held he face high . “ LOVE TRIANGLE~~~~~”
EYAAAA, aku ahh, COOL EYH! Woooooooooo~ HAHA. Lawa suara ku nyanyi? HAHA
“ well, setting the alarm of course, it’s a BIG day,” She said while biting of this one large hamburger.
HAHA. YES, A BIG DAY. YOU&TAEMIN’s plang tu!
“ ohh well, you see, I heard that guys don’t like skinny girls so yes, im not gonna starve myself anymore,” She said while eating heartily.
HAHA. I’m still on diet kaliah! I am not skinny so I’m still on diet. Jh suruh.. HAHA. *mihir!
“ SAORI WHERE ARE YOU GOING?” just as ive guessed, she’s trying to make us feel like we’re couples that just need a privacy.
Yes, you guys are couple. The most romantic couple. HAHA!
OMG! Taemin puya picture Cuteee ah. Like really cutee. Aku mahu! HAHAH. See? Reah picture atu ada please! Please! Please! So, DITCH KH BAH!
I WANT MORE! Don’t STOP! CONTINUE WRITING IT ASAP! Bek ko buat if inda, nda ku sekulah nie hari Khamis. HAHA.
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